There are so many things that you dont know
So many things that I dont want to show
Like the tears that just never stops to flow
While Im taking it blow by blow
The imense sadness I feel every day
Silent screams for you to stay
Overwhelming thoughts of you in every way
As each second from sanity I stray
Very interesting rhyming! Topic is good and you wrote this piece greatly. It is very original and atmosphere that you created with just a few words is excellent. 5/5
