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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is so sweet and emotional. I like everything about it, so wonderfully written.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Hey, Tracy. Very cute write. Just have some nitpicky errors to point out. Hope you don't mind :)

    "them silly ways that drive me wild"

    ^You might want to change 'them' to 'those'. That just kind of threw me off. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Awww So cute ^_^ Hehe Knew you had a soft side :P Very cute. Pretty thoughts. My favorite part is: them silly ways that drive me wild. I really like that line hehe wish i could have thought of that one and put it in my poem. Reading this poem makes me want to write some more poems ^_^ Its a writers block fixer! ;) 5/5 Should have more of these thoughts.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Sir, what a poems you penned here, even though simply but this was so heartfelt written yet beautiful emotions.....Breathtaking!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    GreaT poeM andD iT soundeD verY sweeT. KeeP uP thE gooD writinG and worK.

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so cute and sweeet tracy
    You write it really on your heart
    And I liked the love in the air at this masterpiece
    Keep it up,
    Your friend
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Awww!!!!! This poem is so cute!!!
    Its just purfect!! Amazing!!!
    Loved it!!!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by genova

    Aww this soo sweet
    its so sad that i cant write loves tho..
    i guess i have no one to give them to..

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
    Check for my new poem'favorite authors' - thanks

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by LiNa

    I loved it tracy really i love how you wrote it and the words just took my breathe away it was really great and i love it i do i hope all is good with you and hope to talk to u soon but full of emotions and love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A beautifully penned poem of love... Superb expressions of deep feelings... An amazing piece... Best wishes... Good luck to you dear... 5.5....

    Nazeer

  • Nice and sweet poem. You wrote it wonderfully, beautiful atmosphere!