2 months no poems? damn lol.. but very good poem

OMG this poem was so good! I loved it

keep writing

sincerely yours,
uwouldntno

Whats going on?
Why can't life be fair?
The only think i want
is for him to be there

^Aww Becca!! i loveedd this poem so muchh.. so many people could relate to this, and i am one of them... you are such an amazing poett! great job, 5/5 from mee... keep it upp!!

Sara

P.S- Evan says hey! haha

Awww. cute becca.
<33 it

It was good! the flow was nice!

o, and i can relate to this poem sooo well!

great work!<3

Omg i love this it's just the way i feel. the rhyming is great, too. Love it.keep up the great job 5/5
best wishes,
take care

Omg this poem is fabulous I love it I can totally relate GREAT job! 5/5 :) Love the rhyming. But i guess when you wrote: "The only think i want" you meant The only 'thing' I want. Anywayz that's nothing keep up the wonderful job!

OOooops. Sorry I didn't remember that I had already commented on that! I didn't come to read others' comments so I didn't see it. I realized that when I tried to add it to my favs and it said it's already in there so yeah. Sorry! But you can remove these if you like so it's not a problem I guess..

Take care