Escape

by Capri   Aug 15, 2007


*This is my second Tanka I had to do for creative writing. I don't think this one is as good as the first but I hope you like it anyway*

In this dark cruel world,
Nobody plays the game fair,
It's never a truth,
Because you're stuck in the lies,
Escape-The only way out.

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  • 16 years ago

    by chris2533

    I disagree.....you dont have to escape....not when you have friends that wont leave and'll help you out no matter what it is they have to do, they'll do it, i know.....i'm one of them :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Melinda

    Wow it's short yet powerful. good job!!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by chris2533

    Whats this one about