I don't know if I can wait for you

by Nicholee   Aug 15, 2007


My heart is sick of fighting,
Sick of waiting for you,
I've thrown myself away,
Thrown myself at you.

When I first met you my eyes sparkled,
And my smile glistened,
Only I know what's in my heart,
And to it I should listen.

You have put my heart through a shredder,
And not even I could put it back again,
But how can I tell you,
That I want to be your girlfriend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Lol that is really good, you beat some of the poffesionals on this! for ur first poem u kick ass!!! nice work,
    One thing though.....
    "But how can I tell you,
    That I want to be your girlfriend."
    You said he put ur heart through a shredder and all...why would u want to be his gf?
    and i think you need to make this a little clearer, as in for example...

    "You have put my heart through a shredder,
    And not even I could put it back again,
    But I can't just get over you,
    For I think I still feel love
    For you it's true,
    Would you never hurt me again?
    If I once again gave you my heart to be friend?
    But I just don't know how..
    How can I tell you?
    That I still want to be your girlfriend.."

    Idk I just made it up then...you get my point?
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    [good luck] ur gona be a star]

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