Writting this letter;

by StoryOfAGirlx   Aug 15, 2007


I take a pen, paper and light
with black ink i start to write
my feelings are cOnfusing you see
and if you knew I'm sure ud agree
so ill sit here and start to cOnfess
On my little lifes BIG MESS,
this girl was troubled; soo naivee,
completely stupid, she couldn't believe

when she heard the words iloveyou
she took it as a joke
didn't believe a thing or 2
that the people spoke
soo many hearts crossed by
and she broke them all
didn't even think twice
of what i can recall
there completely dying for her
to notice that their there
and she can see them perfectly
yet she just couldn't care

its amazing how this works
when you like a guy
and all you do is sit there
watching him go by
maybe because the last one
he broke her real good
she cant trust any guy now
and i dont think she ever would
but shes not sure why it still matters
she shouldn't even care
its pretty sad for the other guys
i admit thats so unfair
she sees it with her two eyes
she knows shes doing wrong
but all shes realy thinking about
is still keeping strong

Boyy you broke her good </3

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  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    Omg i love this poem its so amazing! great job! it is really well written :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    I like this one too,
    guys suck :]
    untill u find someone perfect in ur eyes,
    its like no matter what guys r always da same,
    never gonna change der ways.
    but yeah i ramble on.
    nice poem
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee nichole

    I kno EXACTYL how u feel because ever since this one boyfriend i cant trust n e 1

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg i love this one!! its so beautifully written, theres so much emotion in it too.. excellent work. 5/5
    xx