Stanza 1: Bold start. It,s told like a story; the setting was set in firmly and it is as if you are... recalling those days... It's also black and white:
"Cursed spot...
Celebrating graduation,
In the middle of nowhere...
Fuse on rejoice,
Knowing nothing..."
Too bold to be called foreshadowing, but you know what I mean. Nicely done.

Stanza 2:
"a lovesick couple,
exploring each other..."
Good decor... that little detail makes the whole scene so real, and I'm seeing at it from your point of view.
"Zzzing in the tent..."
ABsolutely ingenius. Onomatopaeia!

Stanza 3:
"Giant size savage,
hockey mask monster,
merciless,heartless,barbaric.."
Simple, but the imagery in here is astounding.

Stanza 4: Simple and violent. There's no emotion here, excepting the last word, so it feels as if we are seeing the whole truth, since it's told from a cold point of view.

Stanza 5: Vividly written, especially:
"When I plunged,
on blood river.."

Last stanza: Surprise ending! Changes the POV of the reader completely; it's as if a movie was suddenly fast-forwarded. Also a little haunting...

"when I was tripped,"
^^

I think this line could be worded better.

"When I reached tree,"
^^
I think you forgot to put in 'the' tree. It would make more sense that way.

"Why you people don't believe me?"
^^
Again, could be worded better.
Just put 'don't' in front of 'you', and it will make more sense.

I thought it was a creative poem. There was a lack of consistency with the flow in this however. It seemed a bit choppy. You definitely had the imagery going. I could clearly picture what was going on, and it did have the dark 'sense'. It somewhat sent shivers down my spine as I read. I don't think many people write poems about Jason, so I'll give you credit for trying it out. Good stuff, keep working at it.

I really like this one it gave me the chills umm usually i dnt tell anyone that lol but i really really did like this one it was really good!It was very well written!10/5

Good job good poem keep up

Creepy!
the end is just shocking.. no one wants to believe
was it a nightmare? i don't know how you got the idea, but it was a awsome one! ^^

Wow i like it ALOT and its our secret lol bt i do believe u cuz its happened to me b4 bt wen i was 10 and it was me and my sister scared bt yea i lk it alot and i really really did enjoy it

5/5
loves
katie

Confusing yes.. but awsome. i loooved the end!

[[loved]] it
the [[crazy]] formality
the presence of [[unstableness]]
i [[loved]] it