Aww!!! Its so beautiful!! I love it. ALot of emotion. I favourited it :D
Well Done.

Xx Chrissie

Awww hunny. We all make mistakes, but I'm sure if you two weren't meant to be, you had every right to break it apart with him. I know it's not an easy feat, but try your best. Keep that chin up. =)

The flow in this was fantastic. I loved how smooth it went. It didn't seem forced or jammed in. Just simply gorgeous flow. The emotion was so raw as well. And I liked how you put your emotions into the poem, like crying on the paper, etc. Terrific write. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxoo

Samantha

This is what I consider a good poem. Comes from the heart, means something. And well written too =P. Beautiful. I think I favored this part

"Writing this poem for you
Tears dripping on the page
Ripping my own heart apart
'Cause I pushed you away"

Idk, got my attention. Keep up the good work.

Oh i love the content simple but so touchy, although it was really sad.. but i'm expecting of a longer poem coz i think u can still expand or make it longer, it feels like your still limiting your imaginations and feelings. keep it up!

This was short and to the point, yet it still got the message across....It was beautifully written, Hope Your Getting Better....Anyway, I loved this piece of poetry, the wording was jsut right and The flow was flawless through out the whole thing

5/5

This was short and to the point, yet it still got the message across....It was beautifully written, Hope Your Getting Better....Anyway, I loved this piece of poetry, the wording was jsut right and The flow was flawless through out the whole thing

5/5

Short, sad but really well written.
I can relate, i could see the emotion and the imagery was pretty good.
I couldnt see any faults and i liked the structure
love Tara-Kay
x

Thats sad.. Wonderfully written.. Great Job.. It flowed pretty much the whole poem.. It was short.. but you got your point across..

I love your poems please read my "always in your eye" and "I WISH" i would really appreciate it

Sad cute and short just the way i like em excellent job 5/5 for a touching piece

I think many can relate to the heartache you expressed, wonderfully, in this piece. It was short but still all the emotion was there. 5/5

marcella

This poem is so sad, its well wriiten and full of emotion
xx

"everything happens for a reason" trust me on this quote things will be shown and you will understand ...great write 5/5
laura

Wow I really like this piece. It speaks loud and clear to me and I really enjoyed reading it. I am felling like that right now, so this was a nice write to find. Good work!

This is beautiful...heartbreakingly sad, yet beautifully written.
Loved the ending, very intense and hardhitting, as was the whole piece.

Aww, that is sad!! Having your heart broken sucks =(

Great Poem!

5.5**
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This is also so beautifully written. the words and everything...i can relate so much to this! great job! GREAT JOB!

WOW!!

I didn't feel anything in this poem. sorry, maybe it is just my preffence.
good job anyway

Wow! love all ur poems x