Good poem I enjoyed it and I can relate to it which always makes me want to read the flow seams a little off from the rest of the poem at the very end except for this an exallent poem keep writeing.

The begining was really strong, the emotion's where all heartfelt, and powerful.
This peice flowed beautifully, and really captivated your attention.
However I feel the ending could have been stronger. It sorta just rang off key. Perhaps- Just a suggestion- you could play around with the wording at the end.
Still a enjoyable read,
Well done,
Elaine.

Good job. i feel the same way. im lonely in a crowd. and no one isthere for me. youre speaking right to my heart. keep it up

The emotion you portrayed throughout each pieces it quite unique and beautiful, your word choice is simple yet effective and shows alot of power within this poem. I wasn't so keen on the structure it seemed a little off. Other then that I enjoyed reading this. Well done keep up the good work. Overal I give this a 5/5. ~mel

Great poem, 5/5

Very deep and sad poem
i like it each part for it especailly this part
"Always WAITING FOR SOMEONE
To walk into my world and make it right"
lol
take care

Excellent!

that first part was great, well not much as 2nd&3rd..i can feel something is missing with this poem..

keep it up!

The last line is a little long and messes with the great flow you going throughout the rest of the piece. The emotion was expressed well in this one as well. 5/5

marcella

Gee reminds me of me. I'm very unsocail so whenever people have to pick their lab partners or things like that unless I have a friend in the class (not just like saying hi to them in the hallway friend) I feel very left out. This was very much like me for 8th grade my most hated and depressing year of school. Very good poem. 5.