Baby :)

by apey   Aug 16, 2007


Tell me what you want me to be
maybe ill consider it you'll see
hold me and tell me that you love me
i love you my sweet, sweet baby

you make me laugh and cry
doesn't matter how much you try
you will always be that one perfect guy
until that one day i die

so when your lonely
just think of that one thing
that truly makes you happy
ME!!!

memories of holding and kissing you
i don't want this to leave i know its true
my favorite memory was loving you
i know it was yours to

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  • 16 years ago

    by Linds

    Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ben

    I love the poem. It has a lot of heart and love in it. Very good job. 5/5 =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya another good poem
    you did a good job
    still you need puntuation
    it dont take that long to read your poem
    though and add some puntuation to it
    as you go through it
    a pause here and there
    stuff like that
    tis good though:D:D

    Keenan