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by FinallyContent   Aug 17, 2007


It amazes me how much you don't see
that all I've ever wanted
was for you to show
that you truly love me.

you don't qive a fukc
what qoes on in my head
you noe sometimes i cry
bcuz deep down i noe im better off dead

that moment when you couldnt prove
that you're love was true
i felt a part of me had died
as you carelessly lauqhed, i silenty cried.

im fine, im perfect, im happy; i say
truly deep down i noe nothinqs ok.
and theres nothinq i can do but silently scream
i just pray and i wish to wake up from this dream.

*** i was in bad mood.
i needed to vent. its kinda bad. please rate and comment anyways.

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  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    Could tell that you were venting by how you expressed yourself. good work! i really liked this

  • 15 years ago

    by ChallengexEverything

    Im fine, im perfect, im happy; i say
    truly deep down i noe nothinqs ok.
    and theres nothinq i can do but silently scream
    i just pray and i wish to wake up from this dream.
    ^favorite stanza.
    i can relate.

    loved it
    nice job:]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by lexie

    Omg its not a bad poem i love it
    its really good. I wish i could write stuff like that you must have felt really sad to write a poem like this, But its really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    You say 'it's kinda bad' ??!?!!? it's really not! i love it! i think it's great! hahaha you should get in a bad mood more often... hahaha (sorry.) really flowed well and told a great story. nice work!

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