Lose Control

by Angel Of Death   Aug 17, 2007


One touch and she loses control,
One memory, and sanity's out the window.
Makes it difficult, getting to sleep
For, behind closed eyes, he's sure to creep.

One night so long ago,
Night full of steamed windows.
Temptation so strong, they gave in,
Lust and desire was controlling them.

One touch and she loses control,
Shivers run down, but she's not cold.
Can't sleep while he haunts her dreams,
Disturb the silence, with her blissful screams.

One night all those weeks ago,
This memory, to her, it's precious as gold.
Engraved in her head, for eternity plus a day,
This is one she's not letting slip away.

©Lose Control

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    I really enjoyed this poem you captured lust and love beautifully
    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Really nice poem
    can really relate to this
    :) definitaly going to check out your other poems !
    x x

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    You have a talent for writing, great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Wow! yet again a beautiful piece! i really like your work! (i may have started reading your poems from the bottom of your page... this is why my comments are backwards)... if that makes sense... i'm very tired.

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    This poem is great, the flow of it all and the description is awesome...keep up the good work!=]