R.I.P . . [This is about my cousin's dog we put down.]

by kay ITS CHLOE   Aug 17, 2007


You lay on the ground, not knowing what's going on.
You finally see something, you can't quite make it out because you're so weak.
You see that it's a needle!!
You try to run, but you can't seem to pick your feet up off of the ground.
She's [vet] coming closer, you try to hide, but still you cannot run.
You're glued to the cold floor.
She's her now, as close as she can get.
Before the needle comes close to your skin, everyone gives you a hug and says their last goodbyes.
You can see that they're crying.
You try to get up to give them a kiss, but it's too late. The needle is in and you're falling asleep.
You now hear nothing nor see anything.
This must be my last farwell you think.
<33 . :(

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    This is sooooo sad! I can also relate to it cuz I have had to have three of my dogs put down!

  • 16 years ago

    by kay ITS CHLOE

    Aw . =] . thank you everyonee. <3 =] . (L) x3

  • 16 years ago

    by nayee

    Awwh.
    I hope your okay noww.
    lovely, but it would be better if you seperated it out into paragrapghs or even lines. Im hating on it, because I do really like it. Please rate some of mine!
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by kay ITS CHLOE

    Thank - youu . <3 . =]

    --Chloee.xox

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww thats so sad and you wrote it so great. good job, that was very emotional 5/5