Hey,
Im so sorry for he did to you, no one deserves that! the poem is great though, the rhyming and the flow are good, I also like you choice of words. my favorite lines are: ''My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up"
take care,
stephanie

My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up
Favorite lines^^^. I never heard it described like that before. THis is such a sad poem and easy for others to relate. Good job.
~ Lainey

My heart bleeds while reading this poem. Although you are hurting now you will be smiling again when you meet someone else who truly loves you. Good job on the poem though, you really made us feel the pain inside your heart.

"My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up"

I absolutely love these lines. the are my complete and totaly favorite of any poem i have ever read. this is poem is amazing and probally explains a little bit everyone.

Thats really weird that your boyfriend broke up with you on the 15th, because my friend ash his girlfriend broke up with him on that day and hes greiving it to. but anyway onto your poem, i liked the emotion portrayed through out this, it was great, the flow was a little off in places but it was stilll a great poem

a well deserved

5/5

This was a sad poem. I know all too well the emotional scarring of being cheated on... twice by the same guy. It does hurt and you constantly ask yourself what you did to make him do that. It's not you, it's his insecurity. This was a very good poem and I related well to it. I'm sorry it had to happen to you. No one deserves to go through that.

5/5
Ciao<3

It's a shame how some people think they can cheat and get away with it. I'm speaking from experience. So sorry you had to go through that. But the poem was excellent and well written!! Good job :)

I love your introduction it already convey lots of emotions.. "I can hardly find the words
To express what I'm feeling
But, I'll try..."

next, the other lines were too common for me coz i've read it countless times but i still i like the emotions presented.i suggest, maybe try to expand your imagination more (sorry, hope i didn't offend u)..

Thats a pretty sad poem you have there...It was very good though...

Good Job

5/5

Great poem..so sad..unfortunately this happens to alot of people..and sad to say,im one of them..it sucks being cheated on..but it happens *frown* but keep your head up,you'll find someone better....

"My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up
My face is stained with tears
And it's too hard to wipe away"

^^these lines are amazing..nicely done. 5/5

"My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up"
That stood out the most to me. :) It was an emotional poem, and I am sorry to hear about what your ex did to you. Hope everything is all right now. 5/5
Nicole

"My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up
My face is stained with tears
And it's too hard to wipe away"

Awesome ^. I loved that part especially, i think we all did lol. But I liked this poem all together, very very nice! 5/5

You poor person i know what it feels like to be cheated on 5/5 for greatness and relating the poem to yoursef

Cheaters suck! Sorry, that you had to go through that. The emotion here is great and flow as well. I think you could have went into a little more detail though. I will give you a 5/5 still, because heartache is heartache no matter how you write it.

marcella

This is a brilliant poem, it almost turned a tear well done
xx

Ooo... Ilovethis!

"My heart is shattered into pieces
And like glass it hurts to pick up"

^ Those lines were amazing & very unique. :P

The flow was flawless & I could feel your pain radiating off of every word.

"Ripped up all of our love notes
And I erase my memory of you"

^ & You ending it perfectly. :) Lovely job. 5.5

- Stephyy <3

By the way, I'm adding you to my favorites -- I hope to see more great work from you.

Omg ...i am so sorry you expressed yourself greatly but i know it must have cost a lot of pain
5/5
laura

Sweetie, this was sad and heartbreaking to read, this was penned well and flowed well too.
love Tara-Kay
x

Very nice work, i think too many of us have felt that sting and you did a good job expressing it. Good job.

This poem is so raw and filled with heartfelt pain. It captivates the reader and allows them to feel your agony.

Great job

--Sher