Your write is amazing how you captured my eyes and how you describe your situation, u can run maybe u dont have to but wat do i know haha great poem 5/5

WOW!
This is absolutely amazing!
I can really feel the emotion in this poem and can also relate to it!
5/5

Danielle
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Love it,love it,love it!Perfectly worded,and you really have a way of describing very vividly how you feel in this poem,,making it really easy to understand.Excellent!!! 5/5