Shadows of the Water

by Krissymkitty   Aug 18, 2007


My heart is drowning
Can't feel pain
Can't feel happiness
The water gets deeper and deeper as the wound gets bigger and bigger
I love and still love him
Him who is drowning me
Drowning my heart
Not knowing what he is doing
As the shadows of the water take my soul
And the water takes my heart
I am forever his
And he will never be mine

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, it is totally original and idea for it is great. Repetition of few words leaves excellent impression and rhythm of it is also very good. Well done! I like your word choice it is simple but it still creates impressive atmosphere.

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