Good poem. Love the ending. This poem was sad and it was wonderfully written. I think in the first stanza the flow was off a bit but in all the other stanzas the flow was flawless and I loved how you repeated, "Because you made me cry". Good job. 5/5
It was ok..definitely full of emotions..I think you should have used that repetitive line in all the stanzas if you were going to use it in just a few..for some reason that bothered me..but overall an ok job. Keep up the good work!
The subject was a good one but i didnt feel the poem had any flow or feeling to it, it looks like it good be a very good poem if it was consistant and with more flow not a bad piece for something you wrote ages ago though :)