Comments : Lost You

  • Thats so sad i like it alot

  • 12 years ago

    by the come back

    Some of the rhyming doenst work honestly :( 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Love the ending. This poem was sad and it was wonderfully written. I think in the first stanza the flow was off a bit but in all the other stanzas the flow was flawless and I loved how you repeated, "Because you made me cry". Good job. 5/5

    Keep it up

    -Shannon <3

  • 12 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    The poem was really sad..It was written so good though, and the wording was incredible through out the whole thing and the flow was just flawless....

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    It was ok..definitely full of emotions..I think you should have used that repetitive line in all the stanzas if you were going to use it in just a few..for some reason that bothered me..but overall an ok job. Keep up the good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Miu

    Very sad ending really liked it it was powerful, I can connect to this poem really well. made memories come back. Very interesting poem, with a lot of emotions. Really great work. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Adelle

    Sad poem with the potential to have a lot of emotion however this was frown of by the lack of flow in this piece. I’m not trying to offend you however I believe it this will help you to improve.

  • 12 years ago

    by JaMeS

    The subject was a good one but i didnt feel the poem had any flow or feeling to it, it looks like it good be a very good poem if it was consistant and with more flow not a bad piece for something you wrote ages ago though :)

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    To be honest... It was just OK to me...
    I dont think that the flow was very good
    maybe you should touch up some of that

  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Fair poem, Good work, Nice words...

    oh by the way, who made you cry...