Thats so sad i like it alot

Some of the rhyming doenst work honestly :( 4/5

Good poem. Love the ending. This poem was sad and it was wonderfully written. I think in the first stanza the flow was off a bit but in all the other stanzas the flow was flawless and I loved how you repeated, "Because you made me cry". Good job. 5/5

Keep it up

-Shannon <3

The poem was really sad..It was written so good though, and the wording was incredible through out the whole thing and the flow was just flawless....

5/5

It was ok..definitely full of emotions..I think you should have used that repetitive line in all the stanzas if you were going to use it in just a few..for some reason that bothered me..but overall an ok job. Keep up the good work!

Very sad ending really liked it it was powerful, I can connect to this poem really well. made memories come back. Very interesting poem, with a lot of emotions. Really great work. 5/5

Sad poem with the potential to have a lot of emotion however this was frown of by the lack of flow in this piece. I’m not trying to offend you however I believe it this will help you to improve.

The subject was a good one but i didnt feel the poem had any flow or feeling to it, it looks like it good be a very good poem if it was consistant and with more flow not a bad piece for something you wrote ages ago though :)

To be honest... It was just OK to me...
I dont think that the flow was very good
maybe you should touch up some of that

Fair poem, Good work, Nice words...

oh by the way, who made you cry...