You're Still All I See

by Sara   Aug 18, 2007


I thought life would be better on my own
I was sure I would make it through
But now I'm feeling all alone
I have no idea what I have to do

We agreed on taking a break
To see other people for awhile
I knew this was a huge mistake
When again I saw your smile

Going from taken to being single,
People think it's so easy and fun
Being able to enjoy life and mingle
Really, what have I done?

We thought it was best for us,
For us to be apart
But it feels like a bus
Just ran over my heart

I lay at night thinking of you
Wondering what you dream about
Do you think about me too?
Or has your life just kicked me out?

I relied on you to be there
No matter what the calling
You promised me you'd be here
To catch me while I'm falling

You were such a big part
Of my life from beginning 'till now
I guess I will have to start
My new life somehow

Yesterday you were here with me
Now today you're so far from home
Everywhere, everything, you're still all I see

*this poem is dedicated to my friend Kylie. Her boyfriendd of almost 2 years left for college a couple days ago, and she asked me to write her a poemm. Please comment and rate, it'll mean a lot to Kylie and I. thank youu for reading!*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    This is so sensitive ...the poem is really interesting ...I loved the way u wrote it...U did a great job.
    Keep it up:)5/5..

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Very emotional and powerful! 5/5 And I'm sorry I haven't checked out your poems lately!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awwwww.
    thats so sweet sara.
    they like broke up? kylie and kris?
    or just for now????
    this is a really great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    She couldn't have picked a better person to write her this poem, you truly went above and beyond, but thats what friends should do. Excellent job babe 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    You've done an excellent job at capturing the emotions for this situation. I do believe your friend will be pleased.