Your picture(acrostic)

by Miranda   Aug 19, 2007


You aren't here,but

Our pictures are.This picture can

Unite us over any distance.

Remember when we took this?

Pleasant memories flood back.

I miss those times.Please

Come back soon,and please

Think of me when you're gone.I

Understand you had to go.

Remember I love you and I miss you,and I am

Empty until you return.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Rofl!
    Good Ending. Alot better than mine:P;)

    This peice was touching. And very emotional.
    But remember, you not empty till he return's cause you have a new boyfriend:P. You should write about him, you know bandit would just love it:D:P

    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Curry

    Aww this is sad...

    but i didnt really like the spacing between each line..it kinda made it hard to read.

    and there was one mistake that i saw...

    "Think of me when your gone.I"

    ^^in that line "your" should be changed to you're..thats a common mistake.

    i like the story behind this so i give you a 5/5. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Beatuiful poem, the perfect acrostic!!

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