Comments : Daybreak over the ocean

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5

    LUZAn

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    I enjoy reading your poems ,I feel you write all of them from the bottom of your heart ,you are a very talented writer keep up the good work 5/5 Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by LittleMissUnperfect<3

    Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Such a meaningful poem with some very good imagery the flow in this piece is flawless keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Such a beautiful poem! i love the words you used in this one and everything 5/5...keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    This is a lovely piece of writing

  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    The words are carefully chosen. It takes my breathe away

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a good poem in which you have showed your great talent. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by oldthings

    Wow, I really like this,
    "we lie horizontal in our quilted world"
    so cute. gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling to read it. I love the emotions it sends across, the passion, and relating the passion to the strenght and power of the ocean. it was really nice. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey this is a gr8 write!!
    liked it very much 5/5.
    can u plz read tangled lovers tie of mine and any of my new poems that u feel compelled to read hehe!!

    will keep looking at some of urs
    tkcare

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    Wow. I really really love this poem! It's beautiful. I miss feeling like that.... Anyway....great job! 5/5

    ~Kat~

    P.S. I like your quotes too, especially this one: "I didn't GIVE you my heart...
    But it was yours, the second you said those words."

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awe. it just an awesome. graet work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5