Its rare for me to read non-rhyming poems, but I absolutley loved this! Your choice of words was excellent and you held my attention throughout the entire poem!
Great write!
Chelsey

Awww hunny. -hugs- He's a freak if he likes another girl over you. The way you show your emotions in this piece just describe how you are. And if he can't respect that, screw him. He's not worth your time.

As for the poem...it was really good. You did an excellent job. I loved the emtoion and then how you personified jealousy. Brilliant. And how it hides under your nose, always staring at you. Great job at the description and personification. I really liked your last stanza. It stood out from the rest, and I liked the change. Very unique. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awww...jealousy is really hard to deal with.. i know from expierence(im a very jealous person when it comes to relationships)...

but as for the poem..it was well written and had emotion put into it...nice job.5/5

Hey
this is a great poem
you wrote this marvelousy
i really liked it
soo sad through
i hope you beat this jealousy if it is true
good job

Keenan

Hell yeah!

I loved this poem! flow was great and i think everyone can relate to the feeling of jealousy and how it can corrupt a person and their feelings towards their love..great write..keep up the good work!

Amie

I really enjoyed this poem you pulled of non-rhyming really well which was great. Quite deep I really found you wrote this into great depth which hit my heart well done on that it takes a great poem to be able to do that. Well done loved it keep up the good work definitly the best I've read of you so far. Deserves a 5/5 in my eyes. ~mel

Very nice poem, I like it alot. Very well written. Good portrayal of emotions and feelings throughout.

5/5 Well done :)

Dave.

You expressed your feelings well.....the way you express your emotion really inspired me....actually, i have added your poem to my favorite poems......

One of the best poems I have read :)

The wordings are great and it has a strong flow. The message is clear and very obvious :)

You have well structured it and written it well 5/5

Tc
Fsams