One long night in sorrow

by Joe Rhoades   Aug 21, 2007


You are the one that I love
but yet you seem so far away
what could i have done wrong
to make you feel this way

All the good times we had
and all the times we used to say
I LOVE YOU
but today, today was a different day

You had always said we talked about this before
but yet i could never understand
until you said you couldn't take it anymore
then my mind came crashing into land

I had realized that you were leaving me
leaving me for another guy
i was trying to understand where i went wrong
then it hit me, i was wrong all along

i could never tell you
what you wanted to hear
and the pain grew and grew
until it ended us in tears

since that night i had tried and tried
to make things right
but you tell me that you need some time
and everything will be alright

i believe you I truly do
but nothing seems to help me
except the thought of me and you
together at last thats where we should be

I'm willing to give you the time
no matter how hard it is for me
but i hope somewhere in your heart
is the love that will bring us back together forever.

I LOVE YOU HUN

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  • 16 years ago

    by Koreena

    Baby...im so sorry..this is amazing..it really is..

  • 16 years ago

    by LiSa

    Beautiful poem loved it that seems how it goes wit every relationship keep writing

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