This Night

by The Black Rose   Aug 22, 2007


Dark Thoughts
running through your head
keeping you awake
while you should sleep

Forgotten Memories
coming back
when you lay in your bed
in the middle of the night

Morbid Dreams
while you're awake
silently feeling, it's no dream
noticing you want them to become real

Shaking Your head
because you cant sleep
just wake and think
think about what you really want

a knife...
deep in your wrist
slowly cutting, slowly moving
making sure you wont make this night

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Like it !

  • 18 years ago

    by Birgit

    I like how you.. ehh, how do you say that xD You start from one part.. and just add stuff to that one part and then turn it around.. like something different.. well.. I'm having a hard time giving comments today, I just like the poem =P
    x
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Reading it again i think its fantastic and describes somewhat what i feel :) well done

  • 18 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    I was going to say something quite poetic but i cant remember it i love it nice hidden subtle hints and meanings :)

  • 18 years ago

    by No one

    Oooo... twisted! But cool. Nice build-up!
    xx

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