This is a great poem...i feel sorry for the people who go through this....

as for the poem..i love the idea..it really worked for this poem...it flowed perfectly. i really enjoyed reading this.5/5

Very good job, I like this new style very creative and easy-going. Oh an very nice vocabulary, Great job, keep it up.

I think it's pretty cool that you could put two things together into one poem! I enjoyed reading it even though I didn't know some words; lol.

I really liked the imaginary feelings you had brought into this poem.

Very good 5/5

I seen this in the club and thought it was quite amazing to tell you the truth, I don't think i've ever seen these two styles combined together so you have made up your own very clever. I loved the word choice you used strong and effective held together with powerful emotions. Altogether I have loved this piece. Well done keep up the good work~mel

Wow that was unique 5/5

Great poem
loved the wayt it is written
what exactly is an ottava rima though
i know acrostic lol but yeah nto sure of the other
but great job on the poem
tis wonderfully written

Keenan

It was short but very meaningful.. it express well and has a deep meaning word by words.. great job5/5

This poem has superb atmosphere. It is short but very powerful. Every line is effective and you wrote it greatly. I enjoyed reading it. Well done! 5/5

This poem has superb atmosphere. It is short but very powerful. Every line is effective and you wrote it greatly. I enjoyed reading it. Well done! 5/5

Nice poem, flowd well, the mix was kl! good stuff!5/5

Aisha