I love this Haiku... brilliantly penned... Great stuff.

It was so beautiful.. it was gorge

But the last line in the thirds haiku is six syllables instead of five. Just thought I'd point it out before someone else tears into it, lol

Excellent stuff tho

5/5
*Gem*

A Beautifully Penned Haiku.

Your imagery was gorgeous, you really paint a touching picture.

Very much enjoyble,
5/5 Elaine.

I haiku, well originol haiku and the only type i know about is onlyy 4 lines. not four stanzas.
but it was still a greta write and i am gonna vote on it as if it were a poem not a haiku poem

Nice poem......too short again lol ^_^ 5/5

This is good...even though im not familiar with haiku poems,i thought this particular one was good... flow was great.

5/5

Beautiful haiku poem...it kinda had a little bit of imagery to it....it really relaxed me just thinking about the concept of this poem..

nice flow..everything was good..

good work.5/5

I think it was very well done, im not a fan of Haiku poems but the idea of putting them all together was pretty sweet. Its really cute, excellent job. :)

Awesome! it has a great structure and well written.. keep on writing..5/5

Imagery is superb and you created great atmosphere. You should change the word-winter- in the second or in the first stanza because you used it two times and that leaves bad impression. Anyway this poem is simple but very powerful. 5/5

One of the best I have read in a while. It really made me smile and remeber just how beautiful winter really is. Congrats, this is fantastic.

Another beautiful poem. There's wonderful and very vivid imegery inthis piece. Great haiku poem. Great read. 5/5

marcella

This is amazing that you can write haiku's this well!! and to top it off you have many in this poem.
I like really like the first two lines of the last stanza.
keep it up
peace
soffe

Snow,

This piece brings out the imagination allowing the reader to see a blanket of snow lying outside their window seal.

Each stanza is beautiful. It seems as though I was standing there looking at the scene. I even became chilled for a moment as if I was actually outside in this winter wonderland.

Your syllable count is off a little; however that is not a huge deal. I can recommend that you download verse perfect and it will actually keep count of your syllables for you.

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Again, this poem is awesome and makes the imagination believe that they are watching the snowflakes dance right before their very own eyes.

--Sher

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Nice poem... makes me wonder if it snows in Taiwan?=) i liked it.

Wow this poem is beautifully written, its perfect cant say much more but 5/5 from me
xx

A very good Haiku I like the imegery as it is very strong and has a good effect on the poem.

I'm in awe by anyone who can write well structured poems. I stick with my simple straightforward types of poems and very rarely try anything new, so i'm very impressed by things like this. beautiful imagery, i could almost smell crisp winter air.

This is a gr8 poem..its a very good haiku indeed
and the flow and imagery u used was wonderful..keep it up
bree

This was interesting, from reading your last poem and this one, you have a niche for nature...the streams and snowflakes...really beautiful...just a couple suggestions on this one

"These fragile life of winter"

This might need some rephrasing or to change these to this or life to lives but I thinks it screws up the syllabals. And there the last stanza:
With thoughts of sweet love
And beauty of perfect peace
Be a white sight.

I am not really sure what this means, it kind of doesnt make sense...you might omit it or find another ending, the other 3 haikus are strong enough to support it as a complete poem alone without the 4th stanza....Really good job though! 5/5