Our Journey

by Aisha   Aug 23, 2007


We didn't know what was coming our way but we went aboard and took on the challenge that was set.

Through the rough storms we battled and sometimes were torn away,
Sometimes we clung on and not even the heaviest wave would pull us apart.

The thunder, clapping it's huge hands ordering the next bolt of lightening to strike, but we as friends were forever, and what went on the boat as several individual warriors, came off as one army, ready to go to war together.

To this day we do not part and still are close by. In fact through the thick clouds that gather round there will always be a door to each heart where each and every warrior holds a key.

So don't ever find you're alone because if you open your door and look inside, knowing our fellow companions luck, you'll notice a lot of people inside.

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    by Shirani Graham

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