Extrornary pennedpoem filled with such heart breaking emotionzz

Wow, this poem was filled with such emotion and it flowed so smoothly...it was very enjoyble to read...good job!

Brooke<3

Wow really good like it alot keep it up your really good
_forever carly_

This is sweet, yet sad. I know the feeling. But even though it doesn't feel like it, sometimes it just isn't meant to be. Keep writing, hun! 5/5

Liz =]

The ending was a twist..but it fit nicely. You probably did the right thing(breaking up with him)whether it seems like it now or not. Good piece.

I've never been in that situation..&& I hope I wont ever be...
I couldn't imagine making the one I love feel the pain I feel when I felt heartbreak...
Good Poem!

I'm sure there is more to this story than what is being told. B/c I kinda get what your saying. But this is one of those poems that needs to completly told. Keep it up!

XxXKristie MarieXxX