I Can Do Better

by Daz Mellow   Aug 23, 2007


There's nothing else I have that you'd want.
Nothing else I have that I can give anyway.
My friends, they say that I should just walk away.
They want the best for me, and I want you know,
Even I can see you're not the one for me.

The one I want, wouldn't walk away when I need him.
The one I need, wouldn't think that I'm too much to handle.
And I know you'd walk away, if I said I needed you.
You'd look away if I wanted to be with you,
But you need something, it wasn't hard for me to do...

Oh...have you thought about me at all?
Or is the only that matters is if you're happy.
No matter what that does to me...
Your top priority is you.

Don't even say you'll try to do better.
Too late to change my mind now.
I know you're not the best for me.
And my friends are right, I can do better.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Brilliant!!
    First place in the August contest at PFP!
    Sorry havent posted results till now, i completely forget, being so caught up in work and the september contest.
    But this had great flow, good imagery, very inspirational, just what i was looking for.
    Love always, Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I had to push some buttons upstairs to get you back, hehehe you are wonderful.

  • 16 years ago

    by FromHeroToZero

    Hi
    nice poem
    can soooo relate to this
    hope you'r ok
    ;) sarah
    x x