Beautiful

by Nuh   Aug 25, 2007


Beautiful....
Beautiful you are
The way you are inside out
Dont know whats pulling me back
I try to speak and express with words
But darn my eyes are just caught up with your beauty
And I just spent another day thinking why god spent more time on you..
And why is it hard to get with you..
Youre beautiful
Im not saying this because Im trying to impress you
But I do admire
I just froze with silence
And if only my heart can speak
It would repeat it self "Youre Beautiful"
Beauty of an angel
Could you be the one?
From heaven?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marly

    That is such a sweet poem, i envy the girl you wrote it about =)

    "And I just spent another day thinking why god spent more time on you.." that was my favourite part its so cute.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    LOVE IT!!

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Its really cute, like really really cute.. i liked it.... it flowed well... keep it up

    nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Much better ending....now that you changed it , it really makes the poem have a spark to it... nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aww this is a really cute poem... i liked it.. it flowed nicely...but i dont think it ended right.. maybe you should add more or change the ending...but thats just a suggestion... overall it was a good poem..i still give it a 5/5.

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