I Believed It

by Whitney   Aug 27, 2007


There are times when you feel like you are carrying the weight of the world and that it is going to fall on you any minute.

Like your heart has been ripped out of your chest, through out on the ground, stepped on and smushed all together.

Perhaps it feels like no one cares and theres not anyone or anything in this cold world that can make you happy.

Well that how i feel so don't say you love me unless you really mean it cause i might do something stupid like believe it. AND I DID

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveBird99

    I can totally related to this. nicely written

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a lovely writing, the above I see with nice comments given to your poem. pretty good feelings...

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Aww ur welcome. and thnx for the comment. can i ask a question? Are you goth? I have nothing against them cause i am but i was just wondersing if your name was true. I AM GOTH

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingAnnabelle

    I really liked this poem =).. its really good..i checked out your other poems too and they are great..you have some nice poems here =).. Great Job
    ~Thnx for commenting my poem~

  • 16 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    I likey; and the way you did it was cool plus what it was about its easy to relate too

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