One

by janiL   Aug 27, 2007


One look
to say all there is to say
one smile
wiping hesitations all away
one touch
as two hearts coincide
one moment
allowing all sensations to collide

this is all you've got to make things real
this is time to show how real you feel
all other thoughts have left, forgotten
confusion, anticipation, in an instant.. then

one step
you draw nearer, closer
one kiss
one.. seemingly forever

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  • 18 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Good poem ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent and a very unique poem with a real descrete style and great word choice. Keep it up

    Tc
    fsams

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Wow, the form of this poem is so nice. I like it. Definently the two line where it writes:
    "one smile
    wiping hesitations all away"
    to me that's so beautiful. I give this a 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by isabel

    This poem is amazingly good..
    the flow almost makes my heart skip a beat...
    it's really a sweet poem...
    keep going
    *isabel*

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