You have left me speechless this is one of the most powerful poems I have read truly amazing.

Greatly written. I love this piece.
Each line, everything so perfectly
together. I give it a 5/5!

I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT 5/5

Very powerful piece. I never read anything like it. You did a wonderful job with this. Keep it up. 5/5

~ Lainey

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this poem leaves me speechless
i need a slap in the face and a step down to reality.

take away the worlds pedestool (sp) and let them look at the world.
great job

Hhmmm. did you write this all yourself. or were those words from someone else (the stuff about jamil)? i really liked this.

i dont know if this was intentional, but bad grammar was used.

I want to be a teacher
so I must do good in school.[do well]

=] 5

I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVEIT!!!!! SO MEANINGFULL AND .. JUST GREAT!!! IT'S ON MY FAVS AND YOUR ONM MY FAVS I REALLY ENJOY READING YOU RWORK CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Wow, great story. I can really relate to it!!!
Beautiful pieces!!! 5/5 from me!!!

Wonderful piece.. The emotion very strong and powerful. It's one of the best story about life i've ever read.. It flowed very well too.. And three last stanzas,, it was a great ending for your poem..
Very Nice..
Keep up the good work..
5/5