An interview

by janiL   Aug 27, 2007


It's been a long time,
are you still torn apart?
still shredded into pieces?
how are you fragile heart?

still him you see when you wake?
still crying yourself to sleep?
no, that's okay,
your wounds must have been deep.
do they still bleed?
oh, I see.
they never healed.
you really never left it be, huh?
he's with her now,
and they look real happy.
still hoping he'd return?
still holding on to his memory?
there are others, you know?
maybe he's just not for you.
oh, please don't cry, I'm sorry.
you really can't accept it's through, can't you?
no, it's not pathetic.
your love must have been true.
stop crying.
he had no right to hurt you.
is there any way I can help you?
I hate seeing you like this.
I know you need more time to mend those wounds,
but for now, dry those tears, please?

it's been a long time,
yet you're still torn apart.
still shredded into pieces.
my fragile broken heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wonderful poem!!!!!!! I coudn't stop reading, and even if your english is a little fuzzy, you did a wonderful job picking the right words! im really impressed! I love the way you wrote this, and im sure plenty of people can relate * i know i can* wonderful work again! keep it up!!!!!!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Good poem, you hav ethe potential to make your poems very well, just work on them a bit. :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I like this piece. The worda are so nicely
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