I didnt quite like the ending, dont know why. But anyways overall I really liked the poem. I've read some of your poems and they're really good. You're a terrific writer great talent. Well done on this. Keep writing.

Oh Goran Sweetie,

The pains of love often leave us burnt; yet, somehow we always want more.

I knnow that the worst and most painful thing of being in love is watching the person you love the most love someone else.

You touch the desires, dreams, hopes, and pains that many have felt.

I want you to know all that,
Then I remember you love another guy.
I know what love means,
Therefore, all I can tell you is a simple "hi"

This speaks to me the loudest. I guess because I am in the same boat and have been for so long now that it appears I somehow became stuck.

I wish you the best sweetie. My prayers are with you.

Again, this is a beautiful poem that touches many and leaves the reader besieged themselves.

When a piece of art comes from the heart there is no improving it. This is one of those. Wonderfully penned (or typed).

--Sher

Goran, Well done, on another touching love poem. This was seriously deep. As The Tasteless said. You never seem to run out of idea's, yet each has a different scent:)
I love reading your poem's.
Cause each and everyone comes from your heart.
You are truly talented hun,
Keep it up,
Elaine.

Tis a very good poem goran, ive been here, and it hurts, i like the flow, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming man!!!

I feel sorry for the guy in
this poem, but I like it.
It's sad, yet there's something else
to it. I give it a 5/5!!

Wow sir this one is unique, like how you paint your other poems whith such a color I like this one a sad romantic poem, your such a great love poet 5/5

Gene Ross

It is ok you can tell me more than a hi, i will take it,lol

a beautiful poem brother.

I like it... but the flow is hard to follow. it's a very sweet poem overall though! well done.

I dont lke the ending but over all i like it the emotion is there....great,,...5/5 ^_^ keep writing....

Damn I've gotten that so much over the years, I haate it. So so badly. Its a terrible thing to have to hide from someone you care about, esspecialy when you can't help but think you'd make that girl happier than the guy she's with. I like the topic, ryhmes were a little simple, but i still give you 5/5 i liked it. good job

Awww. this was idk. but i really liked this. there was a change in emotion in the second half when the reader realizes that the woman belongs to some one else. great job goran! im gunna vote for ya. =]

Aww this is sad....and it really touched me because I have felt this same way before.. it hurts but hopefully your heart will mend.

keep your head up *hugs*

great flow on this one.5/5 from me=]

Awww i'm sorry... i hope you feel better soon, it was a beautiful poem though. really a great job.

It has always been this way, the ones we love the most hurt us the most but the ones we think would never do anything to hurt us, brakes you, without even a single thought.......
it is destiny, if you could change it then you will be history..but i wish most that nothing of this would come your way,,ur to kind, to sincer and gentlman like to deserve this kind of destiny..
wish you the best..
plz visit my poems...and do wirte if thou has time
take good care my friend

Awwwe its a nicepoem. i loved the style of saying "hi". you have tlalent. 5/5

I loved the simplicity of word choice and the ending was a real killer - quite unexpected, giving the whole piece a melancholy, bittersweet taste.

Aww that is a really good poem, i love the wording and punctuation beautifully written
xx

Hmm this made me sad but good job. dast xosh