The Right Catch.

by babblingxbrooke   Aug 28, 2007


Flowing in the water, I sit and wait,
I'm perched upon the hook, me I am the bait.

with each tug I'm reeled in only to be found torn apart,
and with each release I'm hoping the next bite will be the one to win my heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I love the metaphor in this( I think its called a metaphor lol if not let me know ^_^ ) anyways I love it nice and short. Very relateable!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww i love that poem! its really cute