by Christina Yap Aug 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
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I considered my innocence a blessing |
by Cella Bella
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I didn't really like how you spaced out the lines in this poem, it's very distracting. Overall, this piece was very unique and I loved the srtory to it. 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
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"My dove died." |
by Crystal Gaze
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I love how you wrote it, the style just work's with this peice. |
by StormyStar
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This is ahmazing.. i love it.. 5/5 |
by nikki
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This was very long with the way you set it out, but it was soo good. |