VeRy EnTeRtAiNiNg!

WOW very deep. That was astonishing. I'm very impressed by the depth of this write. It's so deep... The thoughts you've conveyed in this poem had me wondering as well. To get a reader trapped in the poem like that is amazing! 5/5 and its more than deserving.

Well, this poem really makes me think. I'm not sure how much free will we have, and if life is decided by a destiny. It's best to think as if you're living your life, with no strings attached.

A few errors with grammar, but it was a good read.

This was really good, it's one of those poems that really make you think while reading it, many people write beautiful poems but they're not really thoughtful in any way, and that's what I loved about this one, the thought behind it.
5/5
~gabriella

Ive just noticed this but you are a really deep poet. you must think upon what your gonna write before you sit down and actually do it. and this piece to me reflects just that. kinda sux to that no one can answer that question. nice job- raindrops 5/5

This is an interesting thought and well written.

5/5