Great poem
wonderfully done
this is my second fav by you
good job
and thx for the commenting back
btw that wasnt the end of the series
there is still 3 more peoms to it
i just added one after reading your comment
thx again for the comments
and good job

Keenan

Excellent!! I loved it. Great wording and the flow and rhyming was perfect. I loved it. Most people these days do hide and put on a mask. That doesnt really do anything for a person, just makes them more dead inside. Anyways excellent work on this.

Very good poem...i like the flow of it and very nice vocabulary used aswell. 5/5 keep writing and good luck

I dig this write. more so than others as of late, becouse it has to do with inatimate life, being sentient. whitch is a monsterus + in my book.
good vocab and great flow. for that you get a 5/5 from me

Tom(:

The flow and scheme seemed to go rather nicely. The structure was also great.

You have also used some vocabulary skills that not many poeple attempt; that makes this poem even more superb.

Great job kiddo....

--Sher

Again, this was so descriptive, it makes for a very powerful read. This was very original and I loved the concept. 5/5

marcella

Wow! fantastic imagery! so sad... so true! so beautiful. really enjoyed reading it! nice work. really loved the title too!

They was very good, and very true. Keep it up! 5/5

luv luv luv
Lizzi

Wow, this is a perfect poem written greatly.
this shows your great talent.
keep up the great job

a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

Perfect poem, no rhyme but very interesting.
I like the words: "Alone you stand there, an image of perfection"
nice

Wow. everything i read, and i could not find one mistake, i loved everything about it. the flow was perfect and i could not find any part i did not like. nice work 5/5

Wow. your message behind this is just amazing. i really liked this. your words also were fabulous. they really added to the story. i could picture this all, and really feel the pain. a major five five.

Wow another awesome poem i'm now so sure that you really have this talent.. you had this unique style that captures my interest and so as my heart. about this poem i can't find any flaws and i'm pretty sure people could easily relate on this poem..

I really enjoyed this poem. it had a natural flow to it. But more than that i feel as if i understand the idea behind it. it depressing how we try to spend our whole life tying to be anything but ourselves.The irony of it is actually rather amusing. Good work.
Rocky

WOW i raelly thought that this was soooo good. i think that you captured this wonderfully. Excellent job

my fav...
"For she cannot miss what was never there. "

Srry i ment to write

"Acceptance is just a dream, after all.."

That was one great poem!.. :)

The flow went really well and your choice of words really went with it. It gave the right "feel" to the poem and helped show the "story" of the poem.

gratz and keep writing!

This poem read like it was being spoken, so pure so real and so true. It was another amazing piece of work. loved it xxx alex xxx