This was real deep and emotional! truthfully i was feeling ure pain...ure a relly good poet coz u wrote from the heart! 5/5

tc,

Aisha

Wow a really emotional poem,

Great write.

Jay

I LOVED IT.....IT WAS AWESOME...I FELT THE PAIN...I KNOW WHAT UR GOING THROUGH WIT THAT...KEEP UR HEAD UP...GREAT JOB...LATER

Very powerful to read and i could feel the pain flowing from every word.

5/5

Great!