Loves Greatest Fear!

by ChaosKiller69   Aug 30, 2007


The Feelings Of Remorse,
Seem To Always Lead To Divorce,
But When It's All Said And Done,
I Always Find The Source.

The Love Is Gone,
It's Never Coming Back,
It Went Crashing Down,
Like Kobe And Shaq.

Arisen Are Hatred And Lies,
As If You Were In A Disguise,
And All That's Left For Me To Do,
Is Say My Good-byes To You.

*Please comment & rate, I'm kinda new at this and would like effective criticism, thanks. I'll return the favour.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by miranda miller

    I love your choose of wording. how you put your rhyming skills to the test, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    I like how u used i dont know what its called but where you compared crashing down with kobe and shaq i've never seen some one compare something like that sooo.....lol great job i liked it

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