Angel In Disguise...(Acrostic)

by ChaosKiller69   Aug 31, 2007


Approaching the end
Never really knew why
Good people had to die
Eluding the horror in
Life's greatest creation

Inspired by an unknown presence
Never ending fears

Defeated by the essence of time
Intertwined between two dimensions
Seared by the burning of solitude
Guilty of painful pleasure
Unexpected hope has risen
In this corridor of nightmares
Saved by the hand of fellowship
Eternally grateful

**please vote and comment, this is my first styled poem and I would like to know what people think, thanks**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this it reminded me of someone being saved from hell. wonderful work. I really liked how even though it was an acrostic poem you managed to make it your own and create an image for the reader to see. I also like how you described the scene in metaphores. Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by sarah

    Omg it made me have goosebumps! I love it so much. It's beautiful. keep up the good work :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Well at first I did not know what Acrostic was..but I looked it up. I don't tend to write styled poetry but this was really good. It had good flow and nice imagery. I think it was really well done for your first styled poem. Good luck and keep it up!

    Amie

  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    Wow this is an amzing poem you dedinitely nailed it ;) for your first time, great job, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krazy

    The flow seemed a bit strained, i'm not sure if you were trying to rhyme or not. the word choice is very good, and the imagery is good as well. over all it's pretty good. 4/5

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