My gold fish

by Jose   Aug 31, 2007


I had a little gold fish,
he lives inside a glass dish.

i feed him fish food,
it puts him in a good mood.

one day i came home from school,
and there he was floating in his pool.

i began to cry,
as i said goodbye.

i flushed him down,
into the pipes in the giro

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Oh thats so cute...bye bye goldfish

  • 16 years ago

    by emmerz

    Lol oh i rememeber doing that...oh gosh.

    but as the other comment said, cute yet sad... but not too bad. flow needs some work in a few places, but its one of those short ones so youre fine with how it is.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It's cute and sad. I like it.

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