Dad

by Isabella   Sep 1, 2007


Autumn weather,
Tonight and forever.
It won't get better,
If we don't try.

You keep forgetting,
I keep remembering.
All the lies,
That made me cry.

The crystals are falling,
Changing the Autumn.
Tonight and forever,
It won't ever get better.

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  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Loved the abstractiveness. Was a rewarding read for me since I am a dad. Autumn is a great season followed by the cold of winter.

  • 16 years ago

    by more den just a broken smile

    Very good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this one is short yet filled with emotions that are greatly expressed. Whole piece is flawless, I like it from the beginning to the end and it is very touching.
    Well done, 5/5 from me

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