I think it was confusing. But, in a really simple way your saying the same thing in a different way but then being totally different the next.

In life whether you have someone or not you still have to hold yourself up.

This is sooooo true

Like it.

I like this one..I think that what you said is true. And thanks fer the comment on mine. Although I really think mine need some fixing up..but its early...in my eyes..lol. So i decided blah. I dont care. but i'll get them

That is true i am like that also i know i have to take care of my self else who would
but i really like the poem1

I like this poem. short and sweet and to the point

You can real keep real with your poems

It was short, true and very thought out...once again well done 5/5