You're perfect (I love you)

by December   Sep 2, 2007


You're perfect.
Your smile is so sweet,
Your voice is so cute..
I can see through your eyes..
And i love what i see.
I love you!
Your soul..
Your ideas..
The way you do what's right
And don't care about other's judgments..
The way you're just yourself.
No lies,
No pretends..

Just you!

You're so perfect..
I just can't help to smile
Whenever I think of you..
How can it be?
Are you for real?
I sure hope so..
Cause i really love you..
More than words could ever say..
More than you will ever know..

And it really makes me sad
That i can't see you..
cause you're too far..
But i love you..forever..
You're perfect .. Just the way you are..

Sometimes, I'd like the whole world to know,
But no one can understand
The way I feel for you..
It's unique..
I'm so in love..
With you!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rach

    Just gorgeous. Sounds like you have a great love for this person. keep up the good writing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    Such a Nice Poem

    Keep It Up

    ~ KEEP GLOWIN ALWAYS~

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    Love it, its nice, from the heart as the person below says, quite rightly, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Aweh.

    That was refreshing. A real treat. Nice poem. Write more!

    This was a great line
    "Sometimes, I'd like the whole world to know,
    But no one can understand
    The way I feel for you..
    It's unique..
    I'm so in love..
    With you!! "

    Aweh. How sweet it would if a girl said that to me. Wow...

    Anyways, I can see your still a newbe. But I see the marks of a great poet. It burns within you. It's a good love poem. But If I may ask, maybe write something with... a little more vocabulary. You know?

    The words were something I can make up in the top of my head. Try putting your head in a dictionary and thesaraus and master the words so you write a poem to your fullest potential!! ^_^

    Anyways. I think it is an excellent poem.

    Voted 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    I love it. its expresses feeling so well! reminds me of a special someone in my life...hehe!

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