Broken Spirits

by Christy Redding   Sep 3, 2007


Broken Spirits,

People who just dont know, people really have no love
People really want to love and dont no how.
Broken Spirits, are torn from others.
People who say they love one another,
Cant even love themselves first.
We have to learn to do this, how can we show it
When we dont have it?
Do we all want chances? Sure we do,
But will we give others chances,
Or knock them down before they can get up.
Can we see what we do to others.
Do we really see what we're doing to our own souls.
Do we want enteral life and love?
Or do we just want to tare down someone else,
Do we realize that if we put enough effort into ourselves,
as we put into other people's business,
I really think we might perfect ourselves to a point thats far and beyond what we think.
But we're flesh and we continue to fail, when we need to succeed.
Its really in us,mind over matter and little do we no we let ourselves down.
Maybe if we stay in our own business and keep our lives straight,
better things happen because we all reap what we sow.
Little do we forget, WE are the ones that have to answer,
For ourselves not for others we slam down before they get their start their pulling for,
and that the Lord always gives us. Wow, do we no He gives us all equal rights
He made us all, He knows what we can bare and NEVER no more, but we just dont try.
We're to busy putting more to bare on others when they have their own.
Does anyone understand me here or am I the only one that thinks like this?

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  • 15 years ago

    by rich sanchez

    Very very true. great job! 5/5