Fear

by Mousie   Sep 4, 2007


Fear.
Rolling in
Robes of darkness
Mask the light.
Clouds of thunder
Thrash inside.
Distinguishing joy
Destroying insides.
Forbidding outcome
Miles near.
Mountains of despair
Divide the moods.
Harder and harder
Trying to keep composure,
Show nothing
On the exterior.
Unknowing of what comes next.
Close to breakdown.
Rescue me in your arms
From...
Fear.

in the car, realized i hadn't written in a while, thought i'd put down my thoughts of the time. hope you like it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this, hun.
    I thought because of the way it was set up I wouldn't.
    I'm not big on the whole. . . nonstanza thing.
    But, you did a great job with it.

    Proves you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. (:

    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Fear is something that all humans experience. It can be mind gripping and numbing to the soul. It can rob you from happiness that will be left unknow.

    Destroing is mispelled hehe.. = destroying

    Just to let you know sweetie....

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow dear,
    this was so unique and full of feelings that wanted me to read and read....
    you have achomplished to get attention of your readers by making them want to go with the poem, that is great success dear.

    by the way, congrates on your publication.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Although there wasn't a solid flow to this piece, I loved the way you structured the poem. In some areas it seemed incomplete - but I think that's the beauty of it. It's almost like jagged ends to a roughly cut sheet of paper. One may have to read this piece more than once to comprehend it in several ways, though I liked that this doesn't possess much direction, yet establishes the definition of 'fear' in a unique manner. Well done :)

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