Comments : Definition Of Frustration

  • 14 years ago

    by the come back

    Honestly a great poem full of emotion...i love to read it..^_^ 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, truly great. I like every line, whole poem is excellently written, with superb flow and choice of words.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Trauma lectures all memories;
    Releases entire lived chances.
    My heart bleeds at sceneries,
    For the one merely took glances.-

    You created vivid imagery through the piece, and you expressed your emotions amazingly. I can relate to some parts of the poem.
    5/5, truly deserved

  • 14 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Your poem" Definition of Frustration

    Concentrating your thoughts to a superior writing, keeps our reading go courage, its like a blooming blossom that continues the day go bright. You poems I read, your expressions I studied, your feelings I valued. All and all you deserve, its almost an excellent one I should say. ( 'I mean your writing'). Keep writing, bring more poems and keep me informed, to enable me to feel free to read your interesting poem lettering. Thanks for now, more thanks to follow.. bye!

    Luz and Naz
    (the two dimensions

  • 14 years ago

    by Adelle

    An amazingly well written poem the emotion was so deep and meaningful the title was very cleverly thought of.

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow. a lovely writing style. so many feelings in this poem. it was awesome. i liked it, your word deserve 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This is reall sad and touching but yet beautifully written.I like the style of this poem, It created vivid pictures.And great choice of words.It was really enjoyable to read.
    And thank for your wonderful comment on my poem.It means a lot to me
    Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Laura
    What a sad and heratfelt piece you have penned. The pain and dispair can be felt in your words.
    Good job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent hun. Your poem is real and very true. Such things happen with many girls. Your poem is very nicely worded and it conveys the message. tc darling

    with love
    Fsams

  • 14 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a truly deep poem i liked it a situation which many face 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was a situation i'm sure alot of people have had to face, it was a deep write, i loved it. 5/5

    Solaced myself at old things that was his,
    Trying hard not to lose my conscious espirit.

    my fave lines ^^

  • 14 years ago

    by JaM

    Wow, this is an amazing poem. Very sad but I liked the words you used and the way you used them. Great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Veamm

    The emotions is well delivered..nicely done!!

    keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that thsi poem is well written.. I liked that you have put so much emotion and depth into your writing... I really dont know what else to say...

    great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Oh i was not expecting that ending..but I could definitely feel the pain and frustration. I really like your style and how it pushes past structure and the rules of grammar at times..it takes courage to attempt such a style. The flow was well and the metaphors were great. Keep it up.