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This is reall sad and touching but yet beautifully written.I like the style of this poem, It created vivid pictures.And great choice of words.It was really enjoyable to read.
And thank for your wonderful comment on my poem.It means a lot to me
Oh i was not expecting that ending..but I could definitely feel the pain and frustration. I really like your style and how it pushes past structure and the rules of grammar at times..it takes courage to attempt such a style. The flow was well and the metaphors were great. Keep it up.