It was good...You could just feel the emotions in it...The ending kind of shocked me, but overall it was a really good piece...

I put on a mask
And say it's alright

^ I really liked those lines....

Good Job...

5/5

Excellent poem. I really loved the way its written. Its cool and lovely 5/5

An excellent poem it really creates alot of emotion it was a lovely read and had good strcture.

Wow. the flow and rhythm kept reading this poem a breeze. the emotion was nice as well.

... suggestions for the title:

hmmm, im not sure, i like it, but i suppose it could be better.

uhm, Masked Lover?

look up synonyms of important words in your poem. you may get something. =]

This is actually perfect... the way you have written it is so raw and honest... I love it ... just love it...

I do not think that you should change a thing! It allows the reader to feel your pain and see things in a whole new light...

It is overwhelming! I think you did an awesome job writing this and to allow so many feeling and pain to be expressed so beautifully... very good

--Sher

Wow, you know how to write! 5/5! And thanks for taking the time to read mine too

"With a ghost from the past
I cannot compete
Her name is a blow
Knocks me from my feet"

Just wow. This one blew the ball right outta the park!
Such a heart tugging poem.
It's perfect the way it is, especially the title
5/5
*Gem*

I can't find the words
To say how I feel
The wounds you have caused
Will eventually heal

that was my favorite part.. i know what your going through here... i know how it hurts... i know that the wounds will eventually heal... but i know before they do, they will be cut a little deeper than what they were before..

5/5 keep it up

LOVE THE WAY U WRITTEN IN THIS!!!!!