WOWWWWWWWWW WHAT A AMAZING
POEM you really nip it every word i live
read my I AM YOUR DISEASE ITS GOT YOUR NAME ALL OVER IT. ask yourself
this <IS THE GOING UP WORTH THE COMING DOWN> ME I SAY no more

This is really the best piece i ever read about
cocaine WOWWWWWWWWWW
YOU ARE THE BEST never sto[p writting
read my profile its 4 u

For a poem that had a weird structure.
I found this poem flowed really well.
You really hit all the emotion's, The Paranoia, the need, the shaking, the desire to stop...

This peice was just really well written.
I really liked it.
Keep it up,
Elaine.

A very emotional poem. I like the way you express your feeling; and the way you talk as if it is someone else facing this. It is so nice.

This is my fourth time reading this poem this is the best poem about cocaine i have every
read its like you can read my mind
you have to read this poem called 8:11
by KORIEY SHE wrote about what its like to be a outcast again it was like she could
read my mind. when i use to do coke i would hide in my room. i could hear my family enjoying each other company but i knew if they saw me they would well read
you'll understad also check out ALMOST
BY GRACIE DANIELL JUST TYPE IT IN WERE IT SAYS POEM SEARCH LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THOUGHT CY

Truly i wasn't supposed to read this because i'm still under age so i gave you what everybody else gave. hope it is that good.

Ps PLZ write some other poems.

Wow! chills! seroius chills!!! that was really good!!! i couldn't take my eyes away! it read really well and the imagery was so vivid! nicely written!

I liked it.. I don't do cocaine.. But I liked it. It had a really nice flow... and wow It was good. Twas Good. 6/5 ... but umm.. the stupid vote thing wouldn't let me add in the 6.. so I had to go with 5/5 k. Good poem.

Andy

This is an awesome poem. my only suggestion is to give the poem more structure, and when you said your friend coke, you should capitalize the C. =]

Oh i'm sorry, i guess i just sent you a message instead of a comment, in my opinion which means squat, your poem is awesome, but i think you are a little too "in the middle of the problem at hand" to write clearly about the subject matter, and again, i'm giving you a 5, there is nothing wrong with this at all, just a suggestion, if you can step back a little and look at the same situation from just a little different perspective, the wording and metaphors may come out more fluid, but then again what the hell do i know...absolutely nothing...have a great day....

I don't get what you mean

Took the words right outta my nose

GREAT JOB!! I know how it feels...

I know what its like to be addicted to this
shit its a scary world from the one we all
grew up in, But it can get better and you
can get out still.

Keep happy and safe

-Heather